All Comments on 'Can't Sleep'

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coolstrangeravenuecoolstrangeravenueabout 1 year ago

idk if you do sequels but this would be incredible with a sequel, it's great as it is

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

"squirmed in his arms and grinded her crotch into his hard dick."

Grinded ? Please.

You know the balance of a story rests on each and every word.

Grinded isn't the word here, it's GROUND.

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