All Comments on 'Cantar's Chaos Ch. 02'

Poor Krill, he has his work cut out for him. Glad Cantar got home safe with just a very bad scare.

looking forward to reading more

All the concern for his cousin is wonderful, but he threw his wife to be under the bus? Bad vamp. Bad, bad vamp. :(

The brothers need to give it up 'cause little sister is gonna get her man.

Loved it. So many questions left unanswered. And just as many ways to create more stories. I can't wait for the next chapter. You Rock, IRTR. :) :)

The male vampires are idiots except for Claus. Claus need to lay in to all of them for their behavior towards Corliss.

Yeah! Cantar finally has a husband. Hopefully their relationship won't be in jeopardy because of her thick-skulled brothers. Also we now have new characters (bad) that make the story interesting, but I can understand their want for revenge. However they shouldn't make Cantar suffer for her mother instead. Esmeralda merely did what she couldn't to Janine and Gernick, because Gernick didn't die. Continue your good work and I can't wait until your next update.

Superb chapter look forward to seeing the next chapter posted! Thank you for giving us this captivating tale to read.

Loved it I don't know if you rushed or I was rushing to find out how it ended. But Great

I LOVED EVERY LINE OF CANTAR'S STORY AND I LOVED THE WAY THAT YOU KEPT THE WOLVES AND VAMPIRES TOGETHER AS A FAMIY UNIT. I TRULY LOVE YOUR USE OF THE EMOTIONS THAT THE CHARACTERS GOES THROUGH WHICH MAKES ME BOND WITH EACH CHARACTER AS IF I'M SHARING THE PROBLEMS ALONG WITH THEM IN THE SAME ROOM. LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT.!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The story is good but there are still so many frustrating mistakes. It could be so much better without them.

not long enough

great continuation