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by TomFarrell

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

A fresh take on a sailor's classic fantasy ! I would advise for you to use a bit more punctuation, but it read easily over all. Nice idea, and leaves room for the protagonist to maybe meet her again some day !

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