All Comments on 'Captive of a Lonely Heart Ch. 02'

Good chapter!

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If you're going to write a story, then do so. Not these short snippets.

10 stars! Wonderful start to a wonderful story...

Are we going to be drip fed this story paragraph by paragraph? For crying out loud publish everything and let us read it properly.

You still haven't explained where here who is married to whom and where the extramarital sex is!

You can place your story anywhere, so why here?

Well done so far.

Gah-DAHMN!! 5 stars isn’t enough. Short; but I’m hooked!

All chapters were posted at the same time. Literotica controls when they are posted. My hope was that they would all be posted at once. Sorry if you had to wait a bit.