All Comments on 'Captured'

by marcusarillius

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I have not cum that hard for a long time.

I absoloutly loved the story, it's classy without being trashy and it definately appeals to the mainstream woman.

I would however love to see the story polished and in it's entirity as i am sure that you only submitted it for a laugh.

You have some serious potential and i cannot want for the next installment... love to hear from you soon

Love your work

Always eager.

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