All Comments on 'Careless Summoning'

by ScaryOwl

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Sweet and fun. Five pentagrams.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Decent story - although RAZING should not be off the table. ;^)

Sticking point - 5 liters is the average volume of blood in the entire body. Alice would be collecting that over a year, not just a few weeks.

airgodairgodalmost 2 years ago

Great story, I hope you continue it. Let Alice confront Jenna

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

What a wonderful story! Please continue writing, both in this series and others. You definitely have a knack for it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Fuck, you gave me diabetes. Sequel please. I want to choke on the sugar.

joejacksjoejacksalmost 2 years ago

Good start, and it leaves it wide open for follow ups in both directions, open door for visits and future life with her tormenters, like it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

That was a fun read! I hope you continue your writing.

BanatineBanatinealmost 2 years ago

Well, I guess “wholesome demon” is my new kink.

I’d love to see more of this. Maybe even a series just following Lilith ‘helping’ different people.

EyeMusicianEyeMusicianalmost 2 years ago

2nd part please. With the real jenna atleast.

Through_Burning_EyesThrough_Burning_Eyesalmost 2 years ago

Hot and wholesome, well done indeed. I def agree with those wanting a sequel--it would be nice to see how Alice's newfound confidence fares against her (hopefully former, now!) tormentors.

Tuc0Tuc0about 1 year ago

Great read, like all your stuff! But was wondering, if you write a sequel or not, does the real Jenna get what she deserves?

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Loved it

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