All Comments on 'Carnal Desire Ch. 11-17'

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Anonymousabout 1 year ago

Hello author,

I congratulate you on these wonderful chapters. It took me awhile to get through but it was worth it.

But I would suggest that you release shorter chapters again and at shorter intervals.

Advantage, the stories get more traction, the last story stays fresh in the memory and the overcoming of shorter chapters is less than longer ones.

PS.: I kind of like Jordan and Kennedy together. Now I would like to a Jordan x Sydney x Kennedy endgame. It probably won't happen but one can fantasize.

At least give Jordan and Kennedy one "happy ending", if you know what i mean. And let us take part in it and not cut us out when it gets saucy.

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