by 12oclocktales
When I wrote this story I had two endings. I debated about them for a long time and literally flipped a coin for my final decision. I went for shock over finesse, and am still not sure I made the right choice. The alternate ending has Rick and Louie walking down the tarmac discussing going to Brazaville because that’s where Yvonne is and they both want to hit on her. Makes more sense; might even be funnier. Oh, well. As Louie would say, “c’est la vie.”