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by BGJones

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zooliciouszoolicious9 months ago

No need to continue. We've seen this before, and much better written. You might want to read around the site for ideas about pacing, narrative style, and writing. Good luck.

BGJonesBGJones9 months agoAuthor

You know this is just for fun. If you don't want to read it then don't. No reason to be so negative.

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