All Comments on 'Caught by Desire Ch. 02'

Scarlett stops at an adult toy store and buys some Anal Lube, and an interesting toy called the We-Vibe "Vector+" after reading the box and discovering its remote features. She can't wait to get home clean it and charge it up, deciding to keep her subby locked in the chastity device till after she had her fun using the Vector+ on him. 5 Stars

Amazing start! I love it.

I am enjoying the loving femdom story. It is a nice change from what is usually found on the site.

Premise still good.

But too short.

Lack of an editor/proofreader remains apparent.

You wrote: "...so that he was sat up in the middle of the bed," You meant EITHER "that he sat up in bed" or "that he was sitting up in bed".

Four stars.