by GUSsecret
This is a below average sad story of a dumb cuck, a slut wife, and her lover. A waste of time reading, just one big sex romp. No character development, no real plot, no background, nothing, just a quickie and a bad one at that... 1 small star.
If a person can think, they most likely won't read a story like this one... was it any good?
not really much there story wise. As someone said just a slut wife and a cuck. Not much else to read or say.
I was just confused throughout how this was in first person (husband’s POV) when he was absent for half/most of the story
you wrote a cuck story yet no cuck tag
one star for lying to your audience
your title said "Caught Cheating"
yet she wasnt caught, she wasnt cheating
again one star for lying to your audience
Not just another slut/cuck story but a really bad one. The writing was bad, the story was barely there, it seems you wanted to go for the 5 star spank squad rating. That may make you feel good but its like eating a donut, theres no real value in it.
you are = you're
study up on to/too
The dialogue was a bit stilted, slightly evocative of the porn flick dialogue in the 'Big Lebowski'. Decent story, otherwise.
A case study in the lives of mentally challenged idiots and the readers who think they’re sane.
What, the farmer was thirsty and she was hungry. No need to get your panties in a bunch.
You don't need character development, plot, or background for a quickie. At least I never did.
Funny story.
Thank you for your story GUSsecret.
Take no notice of the usual naysayers who patrol Literotica trying to find some cuckoldry, they're obviously hooked on it but scared to admit it. Keep going, cuckoldry is fun - both stories and activities, I know.
You know to be fair if this is going to be a cuckold story you should let people know or at least put it in the description cuckold