by CindyTV
Figured out this is computer-generated audio. Loved the ending. I Felt that "Alpha male" was used a bit too frequently.
Grammar N/A
The flow of words is very good.
it kept my interest Excellent. I am one that reads most of your stories and enjoys many of them.
BTB/RAAC Hell yeah BTB is a must. She cheated, lied, spoke negatively about her husband, and dress sexy for BF. So yeah she should be burned to a crisp. Glad BF paid a price, pun intended.
Presentation is computer generated. Personally, I believe that computer-generated should be only used in nonfiction. thus N/A minus 1 due to the use of computer-generated voice
Overall 4.3
I would encourage the husband to out the boyfriend to his wife anyway, after he had complied with the MC's demands. Why should he get a pass?
I usually don’t care for cheating stories. Having been there, they tend to make me angry. This was well done. I felt the pain from both the husband and wife. Well done. Thank you for sharing this. 5*
This was a good story to read. It’s probably just me, I find the robo-voice difficult to listen to.