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Click hereAudio version of Choice and Consequence. A short story of Stupidity, Cheating, Revenge and Reconciliation.
This is one of the very rare occasions that I listen to audio on Literotica. I do however listen to tons of audiobooks. I enjoyed it
Grammar is Non-applicable since this is audio
Story Flow excellent
The storyline is very good
Presentation since you are a novice and amateur. you did a good job, but I have very little to compare you to. Suggestion though, this may be hard to do, change voice between characters. Vary the cadence in your tone. Basically don't be monotone. That is also hard to achieve.
Keep my interest excellent
BTB/RAAC This deserves to be RAAC. The right amount of punishment plus counseling
Overall score of 4.4 relatively high score due to a lack of presentation comparison in the audio genre. It may be higher or lower if I have more to compare with