by BrendaD
A simple and straightforward story that I truly enjoyed. I am sure as time goes on and you become more comfortable with your writing that you will create longer and more detailed stories. I think it is great that you stayed within your comfort zone when creating your first story to post because some writers tend to think they need to go really deep and create something that becomes so confusing that the reader usually gets lost and that is never a good thing for someone’s confidence. Thank you for taking the time to write this story and for having the strength of character to post it. I look forward to your next foray as an author.