by CDsRsoHOT
Outrageously funny and a good read. Yeah, it read like your typical cheap porn flick where the pizza guy shows up and enjoys a gangbang but this was a nice twist on the original. I was wondering why they basically ejected her from the house so hurriedly but it turned out to be nothing. The only problem I have with this is if it actually happened, she would have demanded being able to clean up before leaving which would have been brought up during the negotiations because it would take hardly any time and who wants to drive home or even worse, back to the office while having the appearance of a rape victim.