All Comments on 'Change of Control Ch. 03'

It's getting too technically at the expense of eroticism.

Way too much tech for fun.

disagree with previous comments, i really appreciate the detail and loved the story and the whole series so far

Absolutely outstanding, the added details are perfect. It brings it all into sharp focus making the whole thing very vivid and realistic. Of course my initial reaction of “Fuuuuuck me, yes please!” wasn’t nearly as verbose as the comment I decided to lead with 😉

A genuine pleasure to read, almost as good as experiencing it *sigh*, did I mention the “yes please” part?

Thanks for sharing, Tess (uk)

That was a fantastic read. Perfect amount of details to make everything understandable.

Yes, superior. When she was strapped to the table, I thought and hoped a piercing or branding or tat was in her future. Perhaps in the bdsm category that would be a step too far.