by EmilyMiller
Tender and compassionate, while raw and unbridled, , just as new love should be. Loved the kids.
This heartwarming vignette had a sweet innocence about it, something that's usually reserved for stories about teens finding themselves. Beautifully done! Loved it!
Good story. I would have liked more of a picture drawn though. What do they look like? What is the other guys personality like? Etc
This is powerful and sweet story presented in an arousing, erotic tone in just a few words! That is an art! Hopefully, you will provide more chapters to a memorable linking of two men in love and lust!
@BlueEyes1969 - well the feedback has been encouraging so far, so we will see 😊. Em
Charming story of the early beginnings of a relationship and discovering a more profound appreciation of each other.
@Vitriolhack - thank you. I was dreading writing GM, but I guess it’s not so bad 😊 Em