All Comments on 'Changed Ch. 02'

Great story - well written

When is the next bit?

Absolutely some of the best erotic fantasy I have ever read. Unbelievably sexy. I just can't wait to see where the story goes next.

Great story, but the word goofs are distracting. Proof read over and over or better yet get an editor to read it, they will see all the typos you miss.

is a perfect story that doesn't need to be changed in any way.

Wish you were still writing, lit needs more quality stories like this.