All Comments on 'Chapter 03 - Mrs O'Neil'

Well done story, steamy sex scenes. Waiting for the continuation!

I like it so far. But it depends a lot on what is actually happening with him. The second chapter should have been part if the first one imo.

Good start but I have to agree with the readers that making each short page a chapter is very annoying. I would give a higher score but for that misguided annoyance.

Why make each page a chapter? Is it so you can say look I wrote 50 stories? Its not the quantity but the quality! Three stars.

Love the story so far. Keep going. I really liked the part where he see's a rock and the first thing he does with it is stick his cock into it. Guys sure are horny!

Great start your series! I agree that part 2 and 3 should be combined. Can’t wait to see what happens next with the bitchy coworker. Please have MC destroy her with a big messy facial!

Thank you for the feedback! The following chapters will be longer - just be patient ;)

Looking forward to the next installment. Really curious what’s happening.