All Comments on 'Chapter 13 - The Cage'

I'll say this, your title and summary statement hit most of my buttons.

These chapters are a bit too short. The guy is certainly well stocked with bondage equipment, which is not cheap! This is a nice fantasy, with little in terms of creativity and drama.

I have been rating 5 stars up to now, but I have finally reached my limit. RED, RED, RED! Ben is a cruel, psychotic bastard. This is not submission, it’s coercion under threat. It’s a testimony to your writing skill that I’m able to immerse myself in the story, so kudos for that, but If my Dom treated me this way I would be long gone.

Nice slave story. Sounds like she is Secured in a slave transport cage. Wonder if Ben is planning on taking she to other parties. Hopefully he gives her some water to drink, as she is Dehydrating from all the orgasms he's forcing her to have..