All Comments on 'Chaste Honeymoon: Why a Metal Cage?'

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cmj711 about 1 month ago

Enjoyed your story.

Obedience & denial are important aspects to have a strong & caring relationship with a subby.

Anonymousabout 1 month ago

Could do with a bit more proof-reading

Like how could Britney address Greta by name before asking her name a few lines later?

And other slips like changes of person and tense.

Good, but could be better.

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History teacher, and storyteller. Non-native English speaker. Married, father of a son, author of non-fiction books and articles for scientific journals. I am curious to read about the motivations and doubts of characters, their insecurities, and their weaknesses. Often in ...

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