All Comments on 'Cheaters'

10 Big Blazing Stars for a Hot Hot Hot Story! Plus a Happy Ending for the two cheated on! Thanks Buster2U

Good story. Not realistic, but good anyway. Both sides cheating now. Part 2? thanks

They need to stay together.

Lickity, if you are going to write these types of stories, even though it's all fantasy, at least let them have some semblance of being within the laws regarding marriage. No, one spouse can NOT simply lock out the other from the marital home! Nor can they take all the funds from Joint marital asset Bank Accounts without a Court immediately requiring at least 50% be returned.

Re Ed and when Cory called the Police when Ed tried to get back into Ed and Tess's marital home. The Police cannot just force the husband to go away. There was no restraining order so the Police have no grounds to make him leave. (As long as he wasn't being physical with Tess)

The whole thing is just so ridiculous.

This is gonna be fun! Please continue.

I don't rate stories until they are complete, and this one doesn't even suggest a Chapter 2.

Story line is good but dies at the end.

Nice story so far.

Very good....needs a part 2

so where is the rest of the story?

Some commented on the MC and Tess being cheaters. I don't agree.

1) They aren't having an affair, emotional or sexual. Just two friends enduring a bad situation. AND

2) After the vows are broken, they're broken and you're released from yours. The divorce is just the paperwork.

A disgusting mess so poorly edited it was hard to read to the thankfully short end.

Somewhat good story but I don't buy the spouses doing in during a BBQ when their spouses could find them. Worse was the writing; get someone that knows how to write & English before writing more. Was aggravating to read. 2 stars as the story doesn't lead me to rate it higher. Bob