All Comments on 'Cheaters Pt. 08'

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WhoGivesAShitWhoGivesAShitabout 1 month ago

Okay, this one went way off the rails during the last few episodes.

AnonymousAnonymous15 days ago

Very nicely done! Congrats!!

AnonymousAnonymous11 days ago

You managed to write a story where everyone in the story sucks.

WargamerWargamer2 days ago

Was going so until you couldn’t help yourself and included others outside throuple.

That just ruined the vibe completely. In two chapters you took a certain 5/5 and reduced it to a 2/5 just maybe a 3/5.

Adding more does not make the story better, not by a long shot

Better luck next time

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71 years young, & I have over 100 stories saved, concocted over many years. Some were short stories from decades past that I added erotica to publish here. My intent is to share stories, with sex, not sex with stories. I tap these keys a couple hours a day with 2 fingers. One ...

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