All Comments on 'Cheating girlfriend'

dumb ending. Seemed to never ask for them to be exclusive. The ending was the time for that instead of dumping her.

There might have been a story here, but I couldn't continue.

"The currents were pulled shut but there was just enough of a gap for me to see" is not a typo. You really can't spell curtains. As for being able to see through a gap - of course you could. Just like a thousand other stories here. There's ALWAYS a gap; the bedroom door is ALWAYS ajar. It's a rule.

"two bottles of Slow Gin" - there's no such thing. It's called sloe gin and doesn't need capital letters.

Quit now while you're behind.

Nice burn and good decision. She's a cheating skank slut and you don't want to be anywhere around a woman like that!

Enjoyable story spoiled by the unacceptable number of errors. I don’t criticise because your language skills fall behind your maths ability, but because the tools are readily available to make your story a pleasant experience for your readers. Write in Word or Google Docs, then run it through Grammarly and 99% of these errors would disappear. Not doing so is lazy and disrespects your audience. I’m not sure anything would pick up ‘Slow Gin’ with capitals though - you may just have to learn that one or read the bottle label.