All Comments on 'Chemical Concocktion Ch. 02'

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C_frommnC_frommnabout 15 years ago
Go Teacher Go !

Love the Story Line need to Losen the Teacher up a Lil .. Fine 16 year old and doing nothing about it Hmmmmm

Gotta Raise the Tent a Little |

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
don't fuck it up, she will be a hell of a lover

So she might be under the effects of a drug, fuck that, if she wants his cock so bad he should give it to her.Let her see if she can wear herself out being a little slut to him. Love the story..Thanks.......Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
You can take it or leave it ?

You can go so many ways with this story. I do hope you decide to have them explore more and maybe even add some others to their fun !! Katie in New Jersey

hypnopuphypnopupabout 15 years agoAuthor
more to follow

7 chapters of the story were written before starting to submit them to Literotica... I really appreciate all of your feedback.

Keep in mind, with 7 chapters written... I'm not going to be able to include some of your suggestions here, but I will consider them for my next story arc!

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