All Comments on 'Chemistry and Biology Pt. 02'

The story is excellent, but the chapters are far too short. I would recommend adding at least one more full page before ending the chapter.

Completely agree, both chapters were far above average, excellent in fact. But way to short. Just as your starting to get into your story... it ends. Be careful to not loose readers because of it. Would be a horrible thing to happen to an excellent story.

looking forward to seeing more of this story, keep writing.