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"We also need to consider if she knows her clients. How about her friends or her teachers? Maybe ex boyfriends or even people she dislikes or even hates. There is always some creepy fat kid in the back of the class. What would it take before she willingly gives up all her holes to that kid. "
Chloe was panting now. She was so close. Jose pushed another finger in.
"Eli, can you take a picture of us."
Eli took her phone and pointed it at Jose and Chloe. Chloe was quite a sight. Her legs were spread wide apart, panties pulled to the side, Jose's fingers inside her. Her breasts were spilling out of the top, and hard nipples poking out. Chloe had this look of lust on her face.
Just before Eli took the picture, Jose whispered into Chloe's ear. "Maybe your daddy will find out what a whore you are."
Jose pushed his fingers deep, to emphasize the point.
Eli snapped the picture capturing Chloe on the tip of an orgasm.
Jose pulled his fingers out of Chloe's wet pussy. He wiped his fingers against Chloe's face.
"Today was just an introduction to see if Chloe would be a good fit for the class. I think she will do just fine. I will be able to turn her into a proper whore. There are a few logistical things I need to go over."
"First. I have a bag of cloths for her. She is only allowed to wear items from the bag. This applies to all occasions, school, work, home, vising parents. Her only wardrobe is items in the bag. The cloths were picked out by other girls that graduated from the program, so I think Chloe will love them. "
"Second. Chloe will be starting her part time job here as a stripper. So, everyday after school, she will work here. I will conduct the lessons during work hours. Today, is just orientation."
"Last. Eli, outside of work, I will rely on you to ensure Chloe does what she is supposed to. I will also be assigning homework, so you will need to ensure it gets done and graded."
"For tomorrow's homework, you need to service cocks. Under 3 cocks is a failure, 3 to 5 will be passing grade, and over 5, would be outstanding. How you service them is up to you, but you will need to provide proof."
"Alright girls, that's it for today. Chloe, I will see you here tomorrow after school."
- COMMENTS
Plasor9 months agoI agree that you moved a bit too fast. Of course that's only a real issue if you should keep that pacing in the following parts too.
But generally I'm more interested in your unique approach than in more details.
Stevewu6099 months agoI'm not looking for Gone with the Wind either. But I want some plot and a little bit of character development. That's why I like reading erotica. The premise of a roommate pretending to be hypnotized and the other taking advantage of that and some subtle blackmail to turn her into an exhibitionist humiliation slut is a great premise. But what was the point of the premise if it immediately jumps to the point of "you're a stripper now and a porn star and we're going to show this to all of your friends and family" and Chloe just goes along with it. Pretending to be hypnotized doesn't remotely explain that. Potential blackmail doesn't either. Sure some kink inside her is awakened, but it's still so unrealistic to go from 0-100 in just that one afternoon. Chloe has absolutely zero character development. No reason for us to really care about any of this.
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To me this story is the equivalent of one of those pornos where the stepsister is inexplicably "stuck" in a washing machine and the step brother just starts fucking her and then she's out and they keep fucking. Like, yeah, she's hot, the video quality is great, and I can def jerk off to it. But like the stuck in the washing machine and stuff made hardly any difference. Here, I'm sure the "sex scenes" stuff to come will be hot, just like in the washing machine porn, but the setup and premise was just dumb. The washing machine premise is actually dumb. Here, the fake hypnotism premise isn't dumb, but it's completely wasted, IMO.
Anonymous9 months agoI don't agree with the comments below you got rid of the boring stuff fast.
I'm more interested in what happens next
Bgreg609 months agoI. Disagree with some of the other comments. I love where it’s going. And where it’s been. It’s a porn story for Pete sakes. I wasn’t expecting Gone With The Wind.
Her trying to go along with the hypnosis she suddenly opened up to what she had been needing. The more she let go the more she needed. I can’t wait to see how for you take her. If Meghan is the model for your story telling, I really looking forward to a great ride.
