All Comments on 'Chloe's First Gangbang Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Extremely rushed, no build-up or history of why Chloe or her boyfriend were like the way they were. Try again!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

This isn't a story. It's a written premature ejaculation.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Wow James be lacking lol

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

part 2....... ?

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I'm an erotic writer living in the Cayman Islands. Originally from Spain, I found my way here in pursuit of a quieter life, where the steady rhythms of island living could give me the space and peace I needed to write. My work delves into the complexities of human relationship...