All Comments on 'Choice and Consequence - Audio'

This is one of the very rare occasions that I listen to audio on Literotica. I do however listen to tons of audiobooks. I enjoyed it

Grammar is Non-applicable since this is audio

Story Flow excellent

The storyline is very good

Presentation since you are a novice and amateur. you did a good job, but I have very little to compare you to. Suggestion though, this may be hard to do, change voice between characters. Vary the cadence in your tone. Basically don't be monotone. That is also hard to achieve.

Keep my interest excellent

BTB/RAAC This deserves to be RAAC. The right amount of punishment plus counseling

Overall score of 4.4 relatively high score due to a lack of presentation comparison in the audio genre. It may be higher or lower if I have more to compare with

Good story!

4

Very, very good... thanks *****

I’m glad it had a happy ending. Thanks for sharing.

Loved it - 10 Stars