All Comments on 'Chores Build Character - Week 04'

I'm really hoping for a happy ending with Kimmy...

I’m hoping for a dark/bimbo ending with her the arm candy/trophy of Braden. Hopefully she gets botox and long fake nails. Maybe cocaine at the strip club if that is something you’re comfortable with. Love cocaine corruption. That would be away to counter her reluctance to look at the training videos

My call is that Jason was behind it the whole time (i hope im wrong though)

Interesting story. Curious to see where it goes!

I second the dark ending with being property of Braden!

One bimbo … or two soon?

Great writing. Hoping for more changes and permanent corruption

Strongly in favor of the dark ending with total degradation and corruption of Izzy… and maybe Kimmy finding herself on the hook, too

Personally, I’m hoping for a happy ending, but with some lasting effects on Izzy.

Also, masturbation is misspelled in the tags.

Any guesses on when Ch 05 will be posted? Hopefully before New Year!

A very rough draft of chapter 5 is done. Hopefully I can complete it before 2024.

Can’t wait for the next chapter hoping for a bimbo ending for her being a dumb little fuckdoll for her roommates

Any news on week 5? Hopefully it will be here soon

Great story! Love it! Don't make the conclusion too soon. Write a couple more chapters. Much more mind control, subliminal, hypnosis, blackmail, peer pressure or shaming. Further suggested body modifications. Piercings, septum, eyebrow, naval, nipples, perineum, clitoral hood, inner and outer labia, anal. Tattoos, breasts, nipples, belly button, vaginal, on the anus, tramp stamp, front and back. Izzy becomes Kimmy's pet. Kimmy's father takes control of Izzy.