All Comments on 'Christmas Present'

This is a wonderful story. You ramp up the tension perfectly. What a happy Christmas for all three. I hope wee shall see more of them all xxxxx

The seducing my room-mate line make me snort out loud. So cute!

That was amazing!! More please!

Well done made my dick hard

You took a well crafted tale and nearly threw it away. Comparisons are odious. Had you stuck to the intriguing dynamics between the three of them, it would have been a five-star rating. You chose to interject a foreign element. Your musing about 58 orgasms in 24 hours is amusingly hyperbolic. Then you followed it up with a claim that had nothing to do with your story. “I’d like to see a straight couple top that.” Or something close. Did that sentence advance the plot? No. Did it develop a character? No! All it did was make me wonder about Emily’s maturity and realize why she has cycled through a series of disposable relationships. BTW, I’m stealing the joke about the U-Haul.

This was a great story. Inventive, kinky, sexy, loving and just plain wonderful. Well done!

WHAT HAPPENS?! Continue this please! It was amazing, and I'd love to see more!

Loved it!!

Loved it, loved it, loved it!!!

What a great scenario and beautifully written to explain how the third-wheel became a gorgeous addition to the sex life of these two older ladies.

I’m pleased you ended this chapter with an obvious follow on by use of the Box - what will happen when you open it up??!!

I hope that Emily eventually gets more out of this than just being Lacey and Rachel’s play-thing and has more say in when she can become involved in their games; currently it seems that she has to wait until invited by the other two into their play world.

OMG please more!

Wow! I don’t know what to say first. You have an amazing talent for tentatively exploring new dynamics in bed. It has wonderful first time feels — slightly awkward but deliciously pushing the envelope in a considerate manner. HOT! The scenes developed so well and the introspection with Emily and snippets of Lacey/Rachel’s feelings added so much. Very well done! Please keep writing! One nitpick is the slight fade out in the final sex scene. The written choreography for a scene is hard for me, but I would have like a continuous stream of the night. I love your writing, it’s hot and sincere. <3

Really great story.

Great story, brilliantly written. I've been lucky enough to be a "third wheel" and the story beautifully captured this dynamic

Excellent story once again. Your style is so readable, so down to earth. Love the way you talk to the reader at times. You combined hot sex with humor. I'm not at all into BDSM, toys, etc., but you made it interesting and, at times, very arousing. Especially loved the remote vibrator scene--amusing and very erotic. Can't wait for more from you. 5 stars--of course!!

Hello,

I liked the development of the characters. I also liked how the two brought in the one slowly. Seemed realistic to me. My favorite parts. When they helped the main character move in. Why the character masturbated on the bed. Loved the restaurant scene. An added bonus is when you detailed what the characters wore.

I liked your writing style.

Fiveinch033

That is simply an amazing and well written story, from the character development to all the descriptive language the puts the reader right there in the room....

Beautiful writing!

Great story! So well written! Reminded me of Anne Rice's "Beauty" series of books. Congratulations on all fronts!

I just love the story! It’s a fantastic, realistic storyline and extremely well written. It reminds me of a couple ladies I met a while ago near my place!

Thank you for sharing.

Very hot story! Again the story has a nice simmering, slow build. It had a good amount of humor in it! The desert part in the restaurant was funny! It was hot, sexy and could get just about anybody very aroused! I like the way it was left open for possibly a sequel.

Oh wow! Please say you're going to continue this story with all of the neighbours together... It's be nice for Emily to meet someone as well, that she can be both on love & in lust with. The whole story was brilliant! It's definitely too good not to continue with.

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Please write more. I love this. Very well written

This story is ridiculous. Ridiculously great. I write and publish stuff on here and after reading a few of your stories I feel embarrassed about how average my writing is. Your detailed descriptions are fantastic. And I will admit this. The last couple stories of yours I just read because I really liked the characters - not for the erotic enjoyment. Damn. You are really good.

Wonderful story, very erotic. Can't wait to read what's next for Emily (and her neighbors).

Gosh you are such a wonderful writer....I'm not into sub/dom life style but yipers, I may have to rethink. Of course I love your style and your detail is just the right amount...little touches of humor here and there, but my bestest judgement is gaged by my "Drip-O-Meter", and Emily scored very high...or better...very low, I'm wet...pretty much soaked...Huggs Laura