by Peter Duncan
The name Gary is a typo. It is supposed to be John, Penny's husband. Gary is the friend that they have been swapping with in previous episodes...Sorry
swap story. Are you planning on doing a bio on each character?
Once again the Chapter seems to be misnumbered. Chapter 8 should have been Chapter 1 and this Chapter 9 should have been Chapter 2. You may want to revisit Chapter numbering sequence! This chapter is hot and erotic, but I only rated it a 50 because of the chapter numbering sequence problems! I noticed the typo, but that is understandable and to a certain extent excusable.
That was possibly the finest, most sensitive description of two people carrying out their very first, longed-for, loving fuck that I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Thanks, and congratulations!
How do bodily fluids run unashamedly? Do they have feelings? You should be ashamed of this story.AHHHHHHHHH! OHHHHHHHH!