All Comments on 'Church Friends Ch. 09'

by Peter Duncan

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
GARY IS THE GUY THEY SWAP WITH

FLASH BACK.

Peter DuncanPeter Duncanabout 19 years agoAuthor
Typo

The name Gary is a typo. It is supposed to be John, Penny's husband. Gary is the friend that they have been swapping with in previous episodes...Sorry

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Thought this was a ...

swap story. Are you planning on doing a bio on each character?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Chapter #'s Are Confusing

Once again the Chapter seems to be misnumbered. Chapter 8 should have been Chapter 1 and this Chapter 9 should have been Chapter 2. You may want to revisit Chapter numbering sequence! This chapter is hot and erotic, but I only rated it a 50 because of the chapter numbering sequence problems! I noticed the typo, but that is understandable and to a certain extent excusable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Beautifully done!

That was possibly the finest, most sensitive description of two people carrying out their very first, longed-for, loving fuck that I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Thanks, and congratulations!

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
How

How do bodily fluids run unashamedly? Do they have feelings? You should be ashamed of this story.AHHHHHHHHH! OHHHHHHHH!

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