All Comments on 'Cindy'

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cutelilhottiecutelilhottie10 months ago

Author started out amazing but his work is getting worse and worse as it goes. Horrible story.

inka2222inka222210 months ago

"This is all Cindy's fault"? I though Nuremberg trials established that "I was just following orders" don't even work as a defense for government employees/military.

When it's a private life, no, it's 100% YOUR fault for being a criminal asswipe. I mean Cindy's too, but it's not an either-or. Nothing that a guillotine for both people can't fix.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

yeah, totally falling off a cliff... no idea why.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Interesting.

sluttyinprogresssluttyinprogress10 months ago

I liked the plot twist, and that you tried something different than the usual. This is almost non-consent mind control (caused by the patch)

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I thought it was an interesting read. Less smut and more psychological horror. Nice to occasionally see something different from an author where they express their creativity. A bit of a dark story but interesting none the less.

toy4LadyandDon2toy4LadyandDon210 months ago

something a bit different. liked it .

winterplayingwinterplaying10 months ago

I really liked this--alot! Thank you for your writing.

ticklishsolesticklishsoles6 months ago

I enjoyed this story a lot. Now if I could only find a few people with whom I could experience similar enjoyment.

Ticklishsoles

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Glad to have the chance to write my odd stories. What I write isn't mainstream but I enjoy writing them for those that enjoy them. I love feedback and to share ideas that I have for future stories. Please know that I do like to experiment, so some stories will be very differen...