by creativeboyinspring
Author started out amazing but his work is getting worse and worse as it goes. Horrible story.
"This is all Cindy's fault"? I though Nuremberg trials established that "I was just following orders" don't even work as a defense for government employees/military.
When it's a private life, no, it's 100% YOUR fault for being a criminal asswipe. I mean Cindy's too, but it's not an either-or. Nothing that a guillotine for both people can't fix.
I liked the plot twist, and that you tried something different than the usual. This is almost non-consent mind control (caused by the patch)
I thought it was an interesting read. Less smut and more psychological horror. Nice to occasionally see something different from an author where they express their creativity. A bit of a dark story but interesting none the less.
I enjoyed this story a lot. Now if I could only find a few people with whom I could experience similar enjoyment.
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