by fictitiousfucks
I know this is a fetish but as a black woman this is just too uncomfortable as it reflects real life events
This is not even entertaining. There's people who actually think like this. Poor work.
You are a gifted writer, but there was no "love" in this story, just the non consent
Remember this is an erotica site and your story is well within non censentual bounds. The two anonymous critics above were probably written by the same person.
So don't let that get you down.
Keep it non consentual. .. keep it flowing... personally I'd would like to see the story move towards the auctions and the legal enslavement of a few white girls whose families have fallen on hard times.
Southern Belle's in real trouble.
But above all please keep it humiliation oriented.
SmCyber
Disgusting. Unnecessary and despite the nature of this Site. This was inexplicably racist and immature.
i think less slurs and more erotic and romantic encounters between the slave masters and slaves to make it hotter