All Comments on 'CJ and Me Pt. 02 - The Pool Party'

I loved this. The build up with Paul was done perfectly. How well I know that feeling of wanting to please and then realising that the one person you are not pleasing is you. The denouement was just lesbian bliss. Five stars from me, darling xxxxx

Loved the pool party Bobbi. your emotions could easily be felt as you awoke to the real you. just as sexxy of a scene you created with words . well done !

Amazing! The confusion of being young, so magnificently grabbed. I hope events will cause Bobbi to break out of her almost dreamlike existence, walking with closed eyes into a nigtmare. And the description of hair messed up by a drive in a cabriolet, so accurate!

Bobbi, i loved this story, i so loved reading it as i was chatting with you in Trillian. Knowing this was in part, or a lot, about you and your introduction. I told you how i was feeling.

Annie

It reads like a hurricane is not only approaching, no already catched Bobbi and whirls her through and through ….. being innocent and lacking experience, then getting drawn into a unknown world, sounds dramatic …. Hopefully some decisions have been guiding Bobbi into happiness