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51Woodie51Woodie6 months ago

LOVE your writing. Descriptive, erotic and sensuous.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Wonderfully romantic, but much too short.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

You should maybe consider using paragraph breaks where they make sense, instead of when you accidentally put one in every 1000 words or so... WALL OF TEXT is hard to read.

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I love writing and have often wished I could do it for a living but alas, I must pay bills. *smile* Thanks to a good friend and fellow author, I discovered the pleasure of short stories a couple years ago and I love literotica for giving me a place to put them! About me - I...