All Comments on 'Closet Submission Pt. 02'

I like how this is going. Try not to stay too far from your ideas to please others.

So much upheaval for her & more to come! I'm curious how or if Koda was involved in any of this?

Well done. I look forward to chapter 3

An incredible story, about 2 people who seem meant for one another. It’s so well written, Alisais in charge, but Theodora likes her being that way, I think any more dominant would take away from the good feelings in these stories. Please write again soon

This series is just getting better and better. I loved the twist with Jake.

great part 2, just as good as the 1st. The favore , wearing skirts(hopefully without panties), having to continue to date jake so he won't be outed. Telling her best friend the she is now owned. Just wondering who the other dom is, is it Jake or Chad? and what about Koda and Ashley who is the dom there? Inquiring minds!

Pappasleaze!

Thanks for a great 5* story. Looking forward to part 3......4,5,6.........

I enjoyed this chapter as much as the first. Very good conversation and sex. However, could you go into more detail leading up to the orgasm and the orgasm itself? Especially the overstimulation. I love the resistance at first when she was begging Alisa to stop. That was perfect. It could do well to express more detail on how she feels. Please write more whenever you can.

This continues to be an amazing read, this chapter really didn't fail to deliver, it was certainly tantilizing. Can't wait to read chapter 3 now.

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i didnt leave a comment on part one, sorry, but i really do llike this, well written and so erotic, thank you for sharing.

Eh. Started fine. But it kinda got ruined with that crazy stalker vibe with the phone switching.

The initial tone was set kinda romantic if a little forceful, but that just twisted the whole thing. Yuck 🤮

Love this series!