All Comments on 'Coffee House Pt. 02'

First part of “Coffee House” was very good, this piece is better or should I say build very nicely on the first part. Your characters become richer, more nuanced while the sex is intensely erotic and so consistent with the storyline. It is sometimes said of good erotic fiction that the sex is the story, the story is in the sex — never gratuitous, rather the sex reveals the storyline/character relationship. 5 stars in my opinion.