by Ashson
Things got wild. Enjoyed it. Ultimately nature will not be denied. Full marks *****
Funny, cute, and plausible... I'd have liked to get a better description of Becky though...
Nice story, well-paced and interesting, you definitely have a gift for writing.
I'm having my morning coffee while I read this. It's not nearly as exciting as the coffee Becky had but then, I hate camping. Too bad. 5* ~~JB
Great story as always, but I think it ended a little too abruptly. Did Paul finish? I think he should have taken her top off and then finished, bringing her to another climax with him. I know you don't often do sequals, but I'd love to read about how Becky earns her coffee the next night.