All Comments on 'Coffee Required'

by Ashson

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LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawgg12 months ago
Author Tells Story at a Caffeinated Pace with Double Cream for the Narratoress

Things got wild. Enjoyed it. Ultimately nature will not be denied. Full marks *****

StrappySandalsStrappySandals12 months ago

Funny, cute, and plausible... I'd have liked to get a better description of Becky though...

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Nice story, well-paced and interesting, you definitely have a gift for writing.

JBEdwardsJBEdwards12 months ago

I'm having my morning coffee while I read this. It's not nearly as exciting as the coffee Becky had but then, I hate camping. Too bad. 5* ~~JB

CunalingGus69CunalingGus6912 months ago

Great story as always, but I think it ended a little too abruptly. Did Paul finish? I think he should have taken her top off and then finished, bringing her to another climax with him. I know you don't often do sequals, but I'd love to read about how Becky earns her coffee the next night.

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