All Comments on 'Coffeeshop'

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Anonymousover 14 years ago

Now this is gold!

This is true erotica. Very well paced and so well crafted and detailed it sounds autobiographical. I really enjoyed this piece.

theognis over 13 years ago

*****

Five.

raconteuse about 13 years ago

Mm-mmmmm

Wonderful. Hot. Oh yes, the tentative coupled with eroticism. Exquisitely expressed, and so immediate in the first person. Well don! The first person POV is not the easiest perspective, and here you've achieved an outstanding result. Thank you for a very fine story.

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