All Comments on 'Collateral'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very different

Waiting on Chapter 3.

I suspect he'll have another slave entered into the ten days. Her first time with a woman.

Thanks Don

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Why is he bothering with training her when he only has her for 10 days? Is this some sort of weird BDSM shit?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Like it so far...wish the actual vaginal and anal sex were told with more details. I like the training/bdsm theme. If that's how Geno wants it then that's how he should get it. Looking forward to next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
A Very Good Story

The wife is a total jerk and too bad she gets so much fun. It is very arousing and enjoyable.

happyjack921happyjack921over 9 years ago
I enjoyed

This story could have and should have additional chapters. Enjoyed it very much

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Quick ending?

Why do your stories end suddenly? This one just barely gets started then it ends. WTF?

castrostucastrostuover 5 years ago
Details

Hi, good story and a great storyline.

Pity you don't go into more detail for the sex scenes after they have been built up so well in the story!

It would be great to hear more about how her body is letting her down through the enjoyment she is getting out of it, her apprehension, her guilt, her climaxes and generally more about her emotions...

I look forward to the next in the series.

Stu

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