by heavyandhorny
The details were amazing and the elements of the story were well presented and made me visualize what was happening to the characters in the story. Great work.
Thanks! I actually have a new chapter that I've been trying to submit for awhile but it keeps getting rejected for editing reasons. Very odd, but hopefully it will be out soon!
I like the story but there is some lack in continuity : poor Meg is left alone just after being told the girl "would meet her in her room in a few minutes" to fuck her brain out.
Pretty unfair to her and ..... a lack of of writting skill of yours.