All Comments on 'College Games Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Excellent work

The details were amazing and the elements of the story were well presented and made me visualize what was happening to the characters in the story. Great work.

heavyandhornyheavyandhornyover 4 years agoAuthor

Thanks! I actually have a new chapter that I've been trying to submit for awhile but it keeps getting rejected for editing reasons. Very odd, but hopefully it will be out soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
poor continuity in scenario

I like the story but there is some lack in continuity : poor Meg is left alone just after being told the girl "would meet her in her room in a few minutes" to fuck her brain out.

Pretty unfair to her and ..... a lack of of writting skill of yours.

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An update for anyone reading this. I lost all of my previous work and then lost the desire to write. But I'm back writing a little now. I am struggling a little with ideas so if you have some post comments on the stories. I'll read them. Currently working on a new chapter of ...

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