by Frustrator
She noticed that she noticed that she noticed a whole lot. She noticed that dam means a structure used to hold back water. She noticed that a damn dictionary would help a lot. She realized that she should utilize the free Literotica.com editor program to help fix the many grammar and word overuse issues.
I like the premise a lot. Forced orgasm denial torture is always hot. My only complaint is that you need to proofread more. You switch the perspective halfway through.
Right down my street, but then, does a house burn up or down? Please, longer, frustrating to start and end so quickly.