All Comments on 'College Professor Blossoms Pt. 01'

Good first story!

4

Got bored with the story on page 2. One is too conservative and the other is to liberal. Don't care for either. How about a woman who's moderate and a guy who isn't a POS? Someone who might have a clue. 2*

I can't wait for PT. 02

I am wondering if there will be some action between Jasmine, Rylen and Anson I hope it does not create problems.

Beginning a story by rattling off body measurements and descriptors like they are sports stats is boring, lazy, and often not needed. It usually doesn't bode well for the rest of the story. Trust the readers to use their imaginations. If there are certain physical attributes you want to include, reveal them naturally in the course of storytelling. Because that wasn't done, I didn't read past the first paragraph.