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by OverLookerKing

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jleetechiejleetechie9 months ago

No idea how to score this: Scenario A. Grammar/Vocab B+. Spelling D. This was worthy of many chapters in the development of the characters and action. Many hot ideas, just too short and compact.

PappasleazePappasleaze9 months ago

I was enjoying this U N T I L Miranda got into the elevator. At that point this story went down hill fast. You had a good set up, could have been some interesting characters but you decided to just stop a story. better luck next time. 2 stars I believe is being generous.

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I enjoy making erotic and arousing content such as short stories and captions as well as my FMK games. I also like to collaborate with other content creators and accept requests when I have the time. If you have an idea for a story, a request, or a collaboration proposal just ...