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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Exclamation points are intended for special emphasis or to indicate excitement. It defeats the purpose when they are over-used and makes the story hard to read. No one speaks that way with every sentence, comment or response at such an emphatic, excited level.

jmkuehnjmkuehn6 months ago

Like the premise. Definitely too many "!". Tone that down. Take this slow. There is much to do in a whole week

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I think I might have liked the material but couldn’t focus past all the exclamation points. Very distracting to the story.

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