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Rwa4768Rwa4768about 6 years ago
Ok

You did better with description in this chapter. I learned a lot about the spa. They did too much kissing and not enough sucking for my taste, but that's just me. I'm just not into kissing men. I like sucking their cocks but that's all. Like I said that's just my preference, others may like kissing.

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I like to write my stories using bits and pieces of real people, places, and experiences. I especially like hearing of people's first-time sex or wildest times stories. I don't mind constructive criticism of my writing. Have a comment or story idea please email me.

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