All Comments on 'Come for a Visit, Stay for Life Ch. 01'

Kinda dumb.

I like the premise- Curious to see where it goes from here.

Never trust a Kiwi...it's the polite quiet types you have to be wary of! :)

interesting start, curious to read more...

So the faithful husband takes care of his dying wife till the end, goes on vacation and this is the thanks he gets from a bunch of c**** in a messed up island community. Just because the guy didn't have immediate family, doesn't mean no one knew where he was going or expected back.

Change the gender of each character and this is a sexual traffic/slave trade group who would be hunted down, eliminated and reviled by most women and men on the planet.

Changing the gender does not make what they do moral in any way shape or form.

Fineshed the first part, so far so good