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All Comments on 'Comingling: 750 Word Story'

by Probus888

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MaonaighMaonaighover 1 year ago

Brilliant! Five stars worth of short story. I couldn't stop grinning the whole way through. I wonder if it did ever catch on?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

As an old biologist, all I can do is applaud!

miaxoxoxomiaxoxoxoover 1 year ago

Wow. This is possibly the most creative story I've ever read. I very much enjoyed it! Well done!

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunover 1 year ago

Especially loved the ending. Well done!

yowseryowserover 1 year ago

Clever, unique, cute, unicellular.

I was sure her name would be 'Cilia'.

dasgoodshitdasgoodshit2 months ago

original. well-written. learned vocabulary. 5*

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I write stories mostly for my pleasure with a plot-line and I prefer stories which have believable motivations. My main focus seems to be erotic horror, somewhat inspired by H.P. Lovecraft, but I do write in other categories, too. Yes, I know tentacle-monsters etc. aren't real...