All Comments on 'Commando Mission to the Beach'

by DirtyThor1

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Westman99Westman99over 2 years ago

Pleasant story....a few grammatical mistakes though. Perhaps a friendly editor might help. Good luck.

PavaoPavaoabout 2 years ago

Keep going with the story, maybe going with a friend next time?

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